Barbara (htbthomas) wrote,
Barbara
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First Review Meme

Find your first ever review and post it.

Mine, from the illustrious mark_clark for It Has Always Been You on Sept. 9, 2005:

It has been a long wait for Peter and Mary Jane to get together and it finally has happened. They have been through a lot to get to where they are here. You did an excellent job in using John in the first chapter here since he was able to find out why MJ left him. It was kind of bad that something like that didn't happen before the end of Spider-Man 2 because John does deserve to know directly from Mary Jane why she couldn't marry him. I really liked the part where John was going to hit Peter and with his spider strength Peter stopped him. It was good that you didn't make Peter hurt John so that he would become suspicious of Peter. Every scene with Peter and Mary Jane was tastefully done. It will be interesting to see what happens next. Great job.


Oh, Mark, you are my first and oldest fic friend. Big hugs and kisses!
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