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DV Ch. 38 Teaser #2

Well, it's off to the betas! 3200 words. Looks like another Sunday posting. But for now, to assuage everyone, a second teaser that picks up right from the first teaser (here's the first teaser for DV Ch. 38, if you missed it):


He brightened quickly, and looked back at her again.

“I’m sure we can figure something out… after all, when has this relationship ever played by the rules?”

But once again, Lois’ eyes were drawn to Jason. This isn’t a decision I can make alone… She crouched down beside him, taking his hands in hers. He looked back at her in that lost little boy way he had, the one that made her want to gather him into her arms and shield him from every kind of pain. But she pushed through, her heart fluttering madly, and asked softly, “Kiddo, you’ve found out so much in such a short time, haven’t you?” Jason nodded, biting his lip. “Clark and I love each other very much. If we didn’t, you wouldn’t be here now. But, I don’t want us to do anything that would make you upset. What do you think about all this?”

Jason stared at her a moment, then turned his eyes up to Clark, who was looking like he was trying not to shift nervously from foot to foot. Then he gazed on the waiting forms of Jor-El and Lara, before finally coming back to Clark and Lois again. Lois desperately tried not to interrupt his solemn contemplation, but it was difficult, as anxiously as she awaited his answer.




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Jan. 27th, 2007 10:42 pm (UTC)
Awwww... poor munchkin! I understand why she asked him, but what a decision. Ten million fangirls will spank him if he answers wrong! *LOL* *hugs Jason*

I really can't wait to read the rest, B. You've set all of this up so seamlessly. Brava! Brava! Encore!
Jan. 28th, 2007 02:06 am (UTC)
Ten million? I dare say that's a pretty high number you imagine for my readership! LOL! And who could spank a kid with a face like that?

Well, the editing is officially done! Look for it tomorrow. Or if you're a good girl, I'll email it to you. But you have to review! And I'll do the same for you! I promise! ...really... *apologetic face*
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Jan. 28th, 2007 02:07 am (UTC)
Not too difficult to predict, I bet.


It's all ready to go! Will post first thing tomorrow!
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Jan. 27th, 2007 11:08 pm (UTC)
A perfect Lois answer..babbling. But I'm glad she straightened herself out and asked their son about it all. In fact, I think I would be disappointed if she said yes right away. Good job, oh great ECQ!
Jan. 28th, 2007 02:09 am (UTC)
Oh, thank you, my dear. And she still has a few more points to bring up before she answers fully. :)

Look for it tomorrow morning!
Jan. 27th, 2007 11:13 pm (UTC)
*sits and stares at him*

Well kiddo... what's your answer??

*resists running around the room in circles so that she can find out the answer as soon as it's posted*
Jan. 27th, 2007 11:19 pm (UTC)
*brings in the chairs as well as the milk and cookies, hands a glass and a plate to Abby, and the Twins of Spam sit, awaiting the answer*
Jan. 27th, 2007 11:21 pm (UTC)

*dies laughing*

*sits in the chair, grabs the milk, and chows down on the cookies*
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Jan. 27th, 2007 11:53 pm (UTC)
Is all excited! Wheeeee!
Jan. 28th, 2007 02:12 am (UTC)
I'm excited too, to find out how you'll react!

Tomorrow early!
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Jan. 28th, 2007 12:03 am (UTC)
Ohh! Cute! I'am wondering what's happening in Jason's thought. Just as his parents, probably! Haha! :D
Jan. 28th, 2007 02:13 am (UTC)
You'll find out soon! Should be ready early tomorrow!
Jan. 28th, 2007 02:22 am (UTC)
Lois is not the only one anxiously awaiting for Jason's answer! :P

Great job so far!
Jan. 28th, 2007 02:25 am (UTC)
Ah, don't I know it!

Look for it early tomorrow!
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