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Well, it's only fair...

...and of course, giving a little update status and teaser never hurt anyone, either.

Apparently, according to bistyboo1974's friend pamalax, it's BETA APPRECIATION DAY!!! So here's an ultra big HUG to my peeps, old and new, who have helped me out:

Georgia Kennedy - my Spidey beta, and soon to be co-author.
betty brant - my DV beta, she of the incredible amount of discussion and detailed help
mark_clark - my beta for all SR-related stuff so far, a great co-author and all-around fun and loyal friend
jenna_knight - a fabuloso Spidey and SR writer who lends a keen eye to my stuff
coltdancer - the creator of the banner of awesomeness above who never fails to provide an AZARFAFA! when I need it.
bistyboo1974 - my 'twin sis' who always seems to know how to help me over my writer's block
kalalanekent and anissa7118 - my super!stalkers whom I stalk in return, and who drive me to ever greater heights of hilarity
mr_beeto - who made sure my construction theory actually held water, and whose prolificacy astounds me

I hope I haven't missed anyone... I suck in advance, if so.

And now...


The sound of the faint click of Jason’s door closing almost echoed in Lois’ ears. For several seconds, not even the cheerful sound of Jason’s cartoon channel penetrated her thoughts. A gray wash covered all five senses, and she felt as blank as the look Jason had just given her before he went upstairs.

Beside her, Richard exhaled noisily, breaking her from her trance. “That was unexpected.”

Lois nodded numbly. What do I do now? Does he just need time? Or does he want me to follow him up there?

She didn’t have time to make any sort of decision – Richard was already rising from the couch.

“What are you doing?" Lois asked tensely.

Richard looked down at her, affronted. “I'm going up there. I’m still his daddy no matter what happens after this.” He started forward, but Lois laid a restraining hand on his arm.

“Is that really the best thing to do here? Maybe he just needs a few moments to sort this out in his mind.” It seemed a weak argument, even as she was saying the words.

Richards eyebrows raised, an expression of ‘oh, really?’ crossing his face. “We don't know what he's thinking right now... he's only five years old, Lois.”

Lois stood, suddenly defensive. “Even when I was five years old, Richard, I needed plenty of time to myself…” Lois’ gaze drifted toward the stairs, and she made a sudden decision. “We'll go up together.”


I'm at 1,187 words. I guess that's probably halfway. Maybe less, I'm not sure. All depends on how distracted I get this evening. *wubs* to all!



( 37 comments — Leave a comment )
Jan. 8th, 2007 12:46 am (UTC)
*gasps* The big parent/child 'discussion' chapter! This is gonna be a good one too. And why do I get the feeling that the Super!Sprout is thinking more than he's letting on...?

(psst... I know I said half an hour, but give me another fifteen minutes. I'm almost done. *grin*)
Jan. 8th, 2007 12:51 am (UTC)
Hey, Speedy Gonzales! Yep, it's that chapter. I hope I do it justice... *winces*
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Jan. 8th, 2007 12:58 am (UTC)
Oh, that's tantalizing. I know that at that age my kids were capable of some pretty interesting thoughts and insights. . . .
Jan. 8th, 2007 01:01 am (UTC)
And we all know Jason is pretty insightful... ;)
Jan. 8th, 2007 01:16 am (UTC)
OMG! Poor Jason!

You better make this right! *raises the fist of DOOOM"
Jan. 8th, 2007 01:30 am (UTC)
Does that fist of DOOOM look similar to this?

And gosh, no pressure, huh? ;)
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Jan. 8th, 2007 03:07 am (UTC)
Like I told Abby earlier, poor Jason is getting put through the emotional wringer by a few of us this week. Poor munchkin. *hugs him*

And *HUGS* for you, for giving me a shout-out. I love helping you out. Just holler if ever you need me, you know that. :-)
Jan. 8th, 2007 11:14 am (UTC)
I was seriously thinking the same thing. It's "poor Jason" week around here. It's a good thing the kid has loving parents to help him through all of this stuff.

I got a bunch more done, but I'm still not finished. I thought of an interesting way to bring up the dreaded "subject"... I hope it turns out as well as I hope. :)
Jan. 8th, 2007 03:13 am (UTC)
Great teaser. And *hugs* for all the wonderful work you do for me (and 90% of the other SR writers).
Jan. 8th, 2007 11:19 am (UTC)
*hugs you back*

90% might be a little high, but at least among my LJ friends that are SR writers, it's probably true! Sometimes I wonder what the people outside this 'circle' think about us. Like we're a 'club' or something. But membership is definitely not exclusive. You all are so much fun to chat and hang out with.
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Jan. 8th, 2007 05:32 am (UTC)
Oh!! Very nice teaser, m'dear!!! Can't wait!

Btw, Thanks to you to be my beta/english teacher! lol I learnt more with you than with any of my prof... haha! **HUGS**
Jan. 8th, 2007 11:20 am (UTC)
Thanks, Kat! More than your English prof? Whoa. But the one-on-one help probably does more than a class ever could. I know that's true for me in most things.

*hugs you back*
Jan. 8th, 2007 11:02 am (UTC)
Oooo... I'm really looking forward to this one :D
Jan. 8th, 2007 11:22 am (UTC)
I hope you really like it then!
Jan. 8th, 2007 03:34 pm (UTC)
Thank you for the kind words. I can certainly say the same about you, my dear friend. You have been a great help to me with my writing and I hope I have done the same to you in return.

The teaser was wonderful. It's tough for both Lois and Richard to handle this new situation. I do wonder if Clark will get involved sometime. I'll await the chapter for betaing.
Jan. 8th, 2007 05:16 pm (UTC)
Well, if all goes well, I might have in in your email tonight. Otherwise, Tuesday. It's probably 500 words from the end, at 1900 words right now.
Jan. 8th, 2007 04:02 pm (UTC)
Dude! It was beta appreciation day? GAH! *wubs to my super!beta Barb*

And, yeah. More on that teaser please. Its such a...tease. LOL!
Jan. 8th, 2007 05:17 pm (UTC)
Do I ever leave any other kind of teaser? I mean, that's the point, right? Get you interested enough to come back for more?

Hee. I hope it'll be posted Tuesday or Wednesday. We'll see. :)
Jan. 9th, 2007 12:41 am (UTC)
Lol, did you just post Ch. 35 on FF.net? 'Cuz I JUST got the e-mail notification. And I got all excited too, thinking you had updated with Ch. 36... :P LOL

Oh, btw, thanks to you, I'm now addicted to Smallville again. *facepalm* I've caught a couple of episodes on late night TV (right as Lois came to the school there - what season is that again?) and after last night's eppy, "Transference" that ended with Margot Kidder's cameo, I am officially hooked. I didn't know that "my" Jensen was in that show!! (That season, at least.) *drool* I would've watched a LONG time ago, lol.

Anywho, just wanted to let you in on the "good" news. :P
Jan. 9th, 2007 02:33 am (UTC)
I got you hooked on Crackville?!? Cool!

Anyway, I updated on Jan. 1, but the ff.net alerts are still not back the way they should be. I hope I have another one in a couple of days! :)
Jan. 9th, 2007 01:11 am (UTC)
I missed beta appreciation day? Where have I been? *hugs Barbara* You are apreciated.

The teaser was well a tease. I feel for poor Jason. Life flipping upside down is now a welcomed thing. I can't wait to read how things go. Hopefully ff.net will stop being so slow. I still haven't recieved the alert for your last chapter.
Jan. 9th, 2007 02:03 am (UTC)
Aw, thanks. I feel so loved. :)

Yeah, ff.net is still really sucky... :( I bet it'll be a pain for a while. I hope to have the chapter done in a day or two.
Jan. 9th, 2007 06:00 pm (UTC)
Very nice beginning. Love the tension between Richard and Lois.
Hey, can you do me a favor? I claimed some pics on 12 Days, but can't see my post...will you check and see if you can see it? (I don't use Live Journal much)
Jan. 9th, 2007 06:36 pm (UTC)
Re: Oooo...Nice
I did see your post. Bisty will probably get back to you with your date tonight sometime!

Yeah, the tenseness continues a bit after this. :) I love that, too. I hope I have this ready in a day or two!
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Jan. 11th, 2007 02:44 am (UTC)
I'm excited to see where the rest of this goes. This little bit was just wonderful as usual. Keep up the great work.

Jan. 11th, 2007 03:05 am (UTC)
Thanks. I'm plugging away at it now. *sigh* Not coming easily, so I hope this is worth it. :)
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