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Clois Smallville Drabble for northern_star's birthday

Title: Surprise
Author: htbthomas
Fandom: Smallville, post 8.11, Legion
Pairing: Clark/Lois
Word Count: 449 words
Rating: G

Her cell phone buzzed from across the room, startling her from a light dose. She turned her blurry eyes on Jimmy in the hospital bed -- still breathing, still asleep... still comatose. By the time she stretched and got up from the uncomfortable chair, the phone had ceased to vibrate.

She lifted it idly, not really expecting what she saw -- a text message from Clark. "Surprise."

"What the hell...?" she muttered at the phone, as if he could hear all those miles back to Metropolis.

But she didn't even have time to send even a "WTF?" in reply before the door to Jimmy's room practically burst open. Chloe came into the room, Clark following close behind. Her cousin took in the scene before her - Jimmy cold and unmoving, Lois looking tired and drawn, and seemed almost as stunned as Lois was. She suddenly broke from her trance and rushed to Jimmy's side.

"Oh, Jimmy..." Chloe breathed, placing a hand on his cheek. She let it trail down the side of his face, as if she were relearning its curves. Then she looked up at Lois, eyes full of questions. "How is he doing?"

"He's stable... he's hanging in there. Jimmy's a tough guy," Lois said as gently as she could. "How are you doing, cuz?" Last she had seen, Chloe was being carried off in her wedding gown by a monster out of a B-movie.

"I'm great, I'm fine..." Chloe trailed off as she looked at her new husband.

Lois stepped back from the bed and eased over next to Clark, who had been keeping his distance. "You could have given me a little more warning, you know."

"She wanted to see him as soon as possible... I couldn't say no."

Lois' eyes narrowed and her mouth quirked up on one side. "And you couldn't have called during the drive?"

Clark looked uncomfortable and only shrugged in reply.

"Dork." She shoved him lightly on the arm. "You are filling me in on what happened ASAP... but I'm really glad you brought her." She gave him a slow smile and he returned it. The sudden butterflies she got in her stomach made her quickly avert her eyes.

To hide it, Lois looked over at Chloe again, who was whispering something to Jimmy, tears shining on her cheeks. Lois suddenly felt like an intruder on their reunion -- and the way she and Clark had left things at the wedding was weighing heavily on her mind... Ollie was right. She just needed to talk with him about it. She slipped over to the doorway, and nodded toward the hall. "Wanna get a coffee?"


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Jan. 21st, 2009 02:30 am (UTC)
Oh, this is just lovely! From the texting to Chloe's hovering over Jimmy and her final resolution. *happy sigh*
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
It just seemed like Clark would naturally want Chloe to get there as soon as he could, as well as see Lois... too bad we have to wait for their reunion. :(

Jan. 21st, 2009 02:32 am (UTC)
Aww, this is so lovely :)
It has made my night!
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:49 am (UTC)
Thank you! It was nice to write a little sweetness after the last ep. :)
Jan. 21st, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)
*claps* This is perfect Lois!

And Clark and his getting Chloe there ASAP!
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:50 am (UTC)
Thanks! I wish they would do this, instead of whatever will take 3 more episodes... A girl can dream! :D
Jan. 21st, 2009 03:42 am (UTC)
*hugs* Thank you again for this. :D I so loved it!!
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:50 am (UTC)
You're welcome again! I was really happy to do it, as small as it was. :)
Jan. 22nd, 2009 03:35 am (UTC)
bah! size doesn't matter at all.

(ok, unless we're talking about arms... and darn it, why don't I have any arm!porn icons?! lol!)
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Jan. 21st, 2009 10:51 am (UTC)
Thanks! If only we could get this on Thursday, instead of waiting until March. :(
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
Aww, this was awesome! I really loved the text messaging! And yay for Lois planning to take charge of the situation with Clark! I love the way you write all the characters.

Wonderful job!
Jan. 21st, 2009 10:52 am (UTC)
Thank you! Lately, the show has made the characters so fun to explore.
Jan. 22nd, 2009 03:36 am (UTC)
Aww... I'm glad that Lois didn't just sweep everything under the rug. :)

Jan. 22nd, 2009 10:59 am (UTC)
Thanks -- I hope they won't completely ignore it on the show! :)
Jan. 22nd, 2009 04:27 am (UTC)
Great story!
Jan. 22nd, 2009 10:59 am (UTC)
Feb. 5th, 2009 05:25 am (UTC)

God I really wish they would show Chloe caring at least a little bit about her husband. Shame on PS3. But thank you for this! :D
Feb. 5th, 2009 10:55 am (UTC)
Me too! Every week that Chloe shows up in Metropolis, barely mentioning her husband for one sentence it makes me frown. :(( Smallville, stop giving me new wrinkles! *shakes fist*

Thanks for reviewing. :)
Feb. 10th, 2009 04:42 am (UTC)
Wonderful! I love both couples.

Chloe's lack of mentioning her new hubby on the show bugs me, too.
Feb. 10th, 2009 11:07 am (UTC)
Doesn't it? It makes no sense at all, even with a wife who might be a bit unsure of her choice, and messed up from her encounter with Brainiac. :(( Poor Chloe, always being written to suit the demands of the plot, not the other way around...

But thank you for coming over to read and review! I always enjoy it when you drop by. :)
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